Monday, June 22, 2009

Companion for me is you..



Crushed hopes, dark world, lost ways and killed aspirations

Once, there was a world of such devastations.

Mourning continued, sobbing followed, night kept creeping in

Plight like this, and a girl fastened there in.

And all the miracles of which mortals are aware; seemed false

Nothing worked, all went in despair.

Indeed the only thing she needed was a little love, a little care

Or may be a little stretched hand to support; but

None came, none bothered and she was left alone.

For a while, suddenly the prayers seemed to come true

On a far land, came an angel, as human he grew

Ripping the darkness, steeped in her little world, wiped her tears off

Making an unsaid promise, held her hand and walked short

Entwined fingers, shivering body and a new ray of hope

Inside she was afraid, but knew now she ll cope

She knew, the angel came for her, came to love and trust her

Yes, she knew he came to be a companion of her

Oh, how happy she was, to be loved, to be cared, to be trusted all again

Unending tears followed, but this time, not in vain.


P.S. It's the nearest poem to my heart...something which came so deep from my heart that i almost forgot that it was just a mix of words...:)
P.P.S. this is actually a dedication, which i forgot to mention ...it's dedicated to the sweet "Angel" who has made my life sugury sweet..with added touch of salt and pepper when he loses his patient nerve :P

18 comments:

Mr. Mcphisto said...

loveeeeeeeeely
love it :)

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

thanks :)

Mr. Mcphisto said...

crushed hopes :(

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

a new ray of hope :)

if winter comes, can spring be far behind?? :)

Mr. Mcphisto said...

If the sun would go down, stop reminding me how
If we ever had the choice I don’t mind now :(

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

Life may change, but it may fly not; Hope may vanish, but can die not; Truth be veiled, but still it burneth; Love repulsed, - but it returneth.

:)

Mr. Mcphisto said...

maktoob

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

believe it or not...that's a mandatory belief for me :)

Mr. Mcphisto said...

i do believe this and its contrary to the poem in other post. but i do believe this.

Aayushi Mehta said...

totally loved this poem!!! awesome work!:)

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

thanks ayushi....glad that u liked it :)
it's even very special to me :)

ǻηgει σբ ❤❤❤s said...

Nice,was very very touching, it touched deepest part of my heart,
waiting for u r more creative and as per blog's nature post.
angel is always with u.:)

Asif Dange said...

MashaAllah very nice.

May Allah bless u always

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

@ angel...

thanks...i m so happy that ppl liked my work..i ll try to match ppl's expectations g\here..let's c if my minds wrk d same for fiction.. :D :D

anywyas thanks to appreciate is naacheez k kaam ko :P

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

@ Asif Dange

:) thanks for liking it ...

may allah bless u2 :)

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

Salaam gulguli...
lovely poem.. and a very lovely blog!!!
i like the way you make this abbreviation poems...
is there a special name for this kind of poems???

●๋•guℓѕнαn●๋•™ said...

walekum salaam aapi..

thanks :)
yes the poems are called acrostic poems :)
try it..

Dr.Kumar said...

Hya Gulshan.....
This is the first time am visiting ur blog.....
U've got a cute one down here.....
Nd the Acrostic is fantabulous.......