Crushed hopes, dark world, lost ways and killed aspirations
Once, there was a world of such devastations.
Mourning continued, sobbing followed, night kept creeping in
Plight like this, and a girl fastened there in.
And all the miracles of which mortals are aware; seemed false
Nothing worked, all went in despair.
Indeed the only thing she needed was a little love, a little care
Or may be a little stretched hand to support; but
None came, none bothered and she was left alone.
For a while, suddenly the prayers seemed to come true
On a far land, came an angel, as human he grew
Ripping the darkness, steeped in her little world, wiped her tears off
Making an unsaid promise, held her hand and walked short
Entwined fingers, shivering body and a new ray of hope
Inside she was afraid, but knew now she ll cope
She knew, the angel came for her, came to love and trust her
Yes, she knew he came to be a companion of her
Oh, how happy she was, to be loved, to be cared, to be trusted all again
Unending tears followed, but this time, not in vain.
P.P.S. this is actually a dedication, which i forgot to mention ...it's dedicated to the sweet "Angel" who has made my life sugury sweet..with added touch of salt and pepper when he loses his patient nerve :P
18 comments:
loveeeeeeeeely
love it :)
thanks :)
crushed hopes :(
a new ray of hope :)
if winter comes, can spring be far behind?? :)
If the sun would go down, stop reminding me how
If we ever had the choice I don’t mind now :(
Life may change, but it may fly not; Hope may vanish, but can die not; Truth be veiled, but still it burneth; Love repulsed, - but it returneth.
:)
maktoob
believe it or not...that's a mandatory belief for me :)
i do believe this and its contrary to the poem in other post. but i do believe this.
totally loved this poem!!! awesome work!:)
thanks ayushi....glad that u liked it :)
it's even very special to me :)
Nice,was very very touching, it touched deepest part of my heart,
waiting for u r more creative and as per blog's nature post.
angel is always with u.:)
MashaAllah very nice.
May Allah bless u always
@ angel...
thanks...i m so happy that ppl liked my work..i ll try to match ppl's expectations g\here..let's c if my minds wrk d same for fiction.. :D :D
anywyas thanks to appreciate is naacheez k kaam ko :P
@ Asif Dange
:) thanks for liking it ...
may allah bless u2 :)
Salaam gulguli...
lovely poem.. and a very lovely blog!!!
i like the way you make this abbreviation poems...
is there a special name for this kind of poems???
walekum salaam aapi..
thanks :)
yes the poems are called acrostic poems :)
try it..
Hya Gulshan.....
This is the first time am visiting ur blog.....
U've got a cute one down here.....
Nd the Acrostic is fantabulous.......
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