I walk among you
My head held high
Altering the age-old notion
I walk towards sky
And I walk fast
As you try to race
Yes! I am ahead
Leaving you to trace
I have learn the art
Well before you predicted
I have set myself free
Of the chains you invented
I demanded my place
And before you could reject
I tried to stand
Only to walk this perfect
I have beaten you dead
In your own game
Perhaps, u made a mistake
When you called me lame
The pain and agony
I endured on your birth
Accumulated for long
Showing its worth
You tried oppression
You practiced strength
The atrocities you carried
Lasted centuries length
The more you tortured
The stronger I have hit your face
I now walk ahead
Leaving you to trace
A gentle Reminder :
Be careful of your duty toward God in Whom ye claim (your rights) of one another, and toward the wombs (that bear you)" (Quran 4:1).
Updates:
#1 Something is wrong with my pen..it's not working and i am not writing :( I wrote this poem in pencil :P
#2 My one year of hijab is gonna complete in 10 days. The countdown starts from today. yay! but i can't think of anything to write :(. Blame my pen.
#3 My visitors crossed over 1000. Actually its 1110 right now. what a number sirji! Thanku , thanku, thanks a lot to all my visitors for reading my rantings.
#4 I just realized i am ranting in a post i should not *shut mouth with both hands* (as if someone reading this small script. Duh!
#1 Something is wrong with my pen..it's not working and i am not writing :( I wrote this poem in pencil :P
#2 My one year of hijab is gonna complete in 10 days. The countdown starts from today. yay! but i can't think of anything to write :(. Blame my pen.
#3 My visitors crossed over 1000. Actually its 1110 right now. what a number sirji! Thanku , thanku, thanks a lot to all my visitors for reading my rantings.
#4 I just realized i am ranting in a post i should not *shut mouth with both hands* (as if someone reading this small script. Duh!
4 comments:
Good poem ...
... A thought of a women trying to walk ahead and live life as she always wanted to be ...
... May God Bless You and May your dream come true ...
_Besides, you know all my thoughts about this now... refer to that if you need to_
this definitely deserves a standing ovation !!! perfecto !
@tan
yup tan...got to know a lot about teh subject..thanks for dropping by :)
@pratsi...God prats u made em step on teh ninth sky....such a comment coming from the poetry master...
i would have reallly done good :D :P ;)
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