Hunger
Hunger striking hard
Silence Prevails, none to care
Cold crime cuddling all..
Missing You
Why you have to be
Like sand, more I close my fist
More you slip away..
Friendship
Red eyes and harsh words
-- Teary eyes and long silence
Is this “the friendship?”
Winter
Winter is back here
Can I be a cold blooded
..In hibernation?
Love..
All lost in bright lights
Of party late night, but you
--calling my number
Borders
Dividing nations
Boundaries perfectly drawn
By evil man’s hand.
26 comments:
Awesome... :)
nice :)
thanks to both of u..js w8 n watch..i m tryin limerick now :D
waise the Idea of Haiku is fantastic Heena..
It shows how creative u r....I was not knowing this Haiku kinda things before... :)
keep it up..
yeah the haiku thing is really awesome. this post is brilliant too as it covers all the major issues. and don't what happened to me that i came up with these.....
Loneliness and me
Live with memories of her
In place meant for us
its 5:45
i write another scrap to you
all see it but you
every night i have
same dream of holding you tight
if only i'd sleep
said i'll never change
will i cry and weep like this
for rest of my life?
Dhir Bro....Ye to bade dard bhare Haiku hai.. :P
But great...
Thank you Mr Shannu ji :D
limerick will be tough considering they have to be phunny
wow dhir...u r even going better than me...tell me honestly..they are real life inspired r8?? :P :D
anyways dear...lots of dard in it ...and its shanu not shannu..hope he doesn mind :P :D
and ya ram wrote one for me ...a limerick...it wont be that tough...v vl get t...ll post that after lunch...njoy
can't help it gul.... btw i can see some realty in yours too :D
and sorry shanu ji but nice to see you being regular here
@anwar
Red eyes and harsh words
-- Teary eyes and long silence
^^this usually occurs in close relationship. for me friendship is apt word though this moment doesn't shows any amity.
hey anwar and dhir,
The word is friendship only...and who said you cant have close friendship...at least i have ppl whom i respect as my blood related kins....but sadly we are not of same family...that doesn't and can never stop us being friends....
and dhir, friendship is close relationship..once you start feeling happy in the other person's happiness (and same for sorrow)..you are automatically close...
and when i wrote this that moment was apt for it...and i suppose dhir ..u are forgetting a lot of things these days...think think :P
Gul i described this moment as friendship only =S
oops blame my fast reading and poor connection between eyes and brains..:P
if not u ..that comment is atleast applicable for anwar...hope he got it this time..:).
Well this one is not haiku but love this one alot...this is bono
I see you standin' on the other side
I don't... How the river got so wide?
I loved you, baby, way back when...
And all the bridges are burnin' that we might've crossed
But I feel so close to everything that we lost
We'll never, we'll never have to lose it again.
oh my god...your U2 obsession showing here too....zyada senti ho gaye kya :P
haan senti line to hai =S
And u know it aches
And your heart it breaks
And you can only take so much
pls excuse me :P
dhir bhai koi purana dard hai kya???
annu ji koi khaas dard nahin hai. yeh toh geeto ke alfaaz the.
@gul koi meri hindi pe gaur farmao :D
hindi baad me dhir...filhaal main GEEto pe gaur farma rahi hun :D :P
meeri geet-anjali tumhe pasand nahin aayi kya :p
are naraaz kyun hote ho...your geet-anjali is really good...with or w/out the " - "
naraaz ni udaas hun :(
ispe to i can't do much..khali symathise kar sakti hun :(
i ll say cheer up :)
there are a lot more pl 2 care :)
ask and you shall receive :) (see, a biblical quote :P)
i walk around couldn't understand where we went wrong and i can't pretend
it wasn't me, it wasn't you but i'm convinced we gave up too soon :(
“You can shed tears that she is gone,
or you can smile because she has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray that she'll come back,
or you can open your eyes and see all she's left.
Your heart can be empty because you can't see her,
or you can be full of the love you shared.
You can turn your back on tomorrow and live yesterday,
or you can be happy for tomorrow because of yesterday.
You can remember her only that she is gone,
or you can cherish her memory and let it live on.
You can cry and close your mind,
be empty and turn your back.
Or you can do what she'd want:
smile, open your eyes, love and go on.”
yeh toh ek aur poem ho gayi!!!
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